All Comments on 'Dad and a Fishing Trip Ch. 05'

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DavyjDavyjalmost 2 years ago

The story started out pretty good and continued in part 2. In part 3, Dad became Jim without any explanation but the story remained hot through part 4. However, part 5 was a repeat of part 1 which I didn't understand. There really was no conclusion.

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