All Comments on 'Dad is a Body Builder Ch. 04'

STUD MUSCLE DAD/SON PREMISE IS DEFINETELY ALWAYS HOTT..BUT THE ACTUAL DIALOGUE/SCENERIOS NEED TO BE REALLY RAMPED UP...NEED TO BE SEX-CHARGED AS THE PREMISE DEMANDS..YOU NEVER TOLD US ..WHERE IS.. OR WHAT HAPPENED TO DOUG'S WIFE/MARKS MOM???REALLY HOT ..SINCE .. DOUG AND MARK HAVE NOW" CROSSED THE LINE"..IF MOM WERE TO BECOME INVOLVED WITH DAD AND SON TOGETHER..TOTAL FAMILY "BI"...NOTHING HOTTER..

Absolutely PERFECT. The story flowed well and was very hot throughout rather than a gradual increase, which I liked.

The descriptions were hot and I like that both main characters fucked other guys before each other. It made things more real and interesting.

To the other commenter; the writer might be gay, which makes writing bi stuff a little more difficult. Plus bi stuff is limited to bisexuals for the most part - I'm happier that he's kept it purely gay.

But yeah, really great work, 9/10 :)

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Damn... what a jizz-spurting super hot story!!