by cburton
That was THE BEST story I've ever read!!! Write more! :)
I am so excited... This seems to be so real! Please keep writing more and more. Thanks
This is a story with a true story line and character development as well as being erotic.
I kind of want to make a movie out of this.
Great story, I hope they get to do more together. Ending kind of made me sad that they went their separate ways like that.
Several years have passed (literally) and Dave moves on to other adventures but the past has a way of catching up with him.
It has been a pleasure to read every single world you have crafted in these pages. Thank you!
It has been a pleasure to read every single world you have crafted in these pages. Thank you!