All Comments on 'Dad is an Exhibitionist Ch. 03'

by cburton

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Simply amazing end :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
No Words To Describe

That was THE BEST story I've ever read!!! Write more! :)

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
Beautiful story

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
masterpiece

I am so excited... This seems to be so real! Please keep writing more and more. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Hot STory

This is a story with a true story line and character development as well as being erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Best erotic stories I've ever read

I kind of want to make a movie out of this.

AquaticaristocratAquaticaristocratalmost 8 years ago
Ending

Great story, I hope they get to do more together. Ending kind of made me sad that they went their separate ways like that.

cburtoncburtonabout 7 years agoAuthor
Coming soon...

Several years have passed (literally) and Dave moves on to other adventures but the past has a way of catching up with him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
wow

You're so talented omg I'd watch this movie tbh

xrellxrellabout 3 years ago

It has been a pleasure to read every single world you have crafted in these pages. Thank you!

xrellxrellabout 3 years ago

It has been a pleasure to read every single world you have crafted in these pages. Thank you!

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