All Comments on 'Dad or Mom? Ch. 03'

by missassam

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maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
I'm asking the same question as well.

Very descriptive story telling. She put the paddle down and picked up the switch. Eric mouthed an "Oh!" I said Oh myself, this is gonna hurt like .....

I still like the mix of story, mostly young people finding out what turns them on. "Their eyes were on fire during the paddling and the switching". Good to see all the girls energy won't go wasted and they might like being nude as well, it starts with one brave girl. Tommy needs to be caught with his cothes folded in a pile and be hauld in to stand next to Eric. What was that new game? Not so sure I like the older men involved, but the youngmen are ok. Just a bit more innocent.

I didn't think I had any comment for this chapter.

maamsboymaamsboyover 6 years ago
Complete the story

This is a good development of Aaron Burr's stories going down a different path. Its clear that Tommy needs a firm hand, Would love to read more and hope that you will continue his upbringing. Thank you

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