All Comments on 'Daddy and Abby Ch. 03'

Did Dad get Abby pregnant a good Ch 4..........

you should add a 4ht part where she wants that big cock in her ass would love to jack off to that

Hope you rot in jail or are lying. These are fantasies where everyone is over 18. You are raping minors.

You need some variety

Your a great story teller. Either your extremely experienced, or have a natural ability to write. In either case I couldn’t put the iPad down till I had finished reading all three chapters. A missing word here and there but, very well done. Thanks for the read.

This story has no credibility whatsoever, the dialogue is appalling and I doubt that the author meets the 18 years old minimum age rule. I'm sure that only other equally immature people will like it.

Very fucking hot. I'd love to read more chapters. Hell I wish I was Abby at this moment w/ a daddy to do all that to me. My pussy is dripping wet. Wish I had someone here to help me out while we read these stories together. For those offended gtfoh.

The dialogue reads like a badly written porn script. Everything else is pretty good but the dialogue needs work. A little advice: when writing dialogue, replay it in your head. If it sounds like something someone would actually say, then you're good. If not, then adjust.

The repetitive 'daddy' in every line of her dialogue got old really, really quick. It wasn't necessary as we knew who she was talking to.