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by leadolores

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
yeah no.

why does she keep talking in third person? that completely threw me off. also shes not a "little girl" - she's a little girl. he's not a "daddy" - he's a daddy. it's pretty clear you have no idea how to write dd/lg.

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