All Comments on 'Daddy and I'

Obviously written by a man, very formulaic and I am really bored with the tank top, is there any female in America who does not wear them?

Having said all of that I still have a hard on after reading it. lol

One of the most boring things I have ever read.. Previous poster is bang on, dude don't write again, until you learn how to make a story worth reading..

Short and to the point. While I personally like the longer stories, short stories are fun sometimes.

It was good. Your writing is improving, and this was much better than your previous story. A bit more detail and a bit more build up would make it better. And also as a personal preference, she shouldn't be on the pill. Adds a little bit of a thrill and danger. Or even better she should lie about being on it and in a future chapter she's just another knocked up fuck slut.

I enjoyed it... Short but hot. Turned me on :D

Jerk-off story, no plot, no build up, no story

I loved it.

I've read most of ur stories and ur English and in all ur stories there in houses without floor because they always lay on the ground why don't u write about people who can buy a house with floors

you made this dad cum...hot

it was too easy going from dance to fucking, no real seduction

I liked it because when I come to read erotica, I generally like the shorter works. I might start off with a longer story, but usually I want short ones that have a quick progression. I'm a cis-gendered woman who just loves a good daddy story. (and no, I had no daddy issues with my father!)

Enjoy this story and would enjoy either story continuing or a new story. Very well wrote!

Apparently not.

Had the best orgasm reading your story, thanks

this has given me ideas on how to get daddy to fuck me