All Comments on 'Daddy Came in My Room'

Hot story, Made my pussy all wet and throbbing. Can't wait to read the next one where he fucks her. Hope he knocks her up.

couldnt read it

I'm sorry but I couldn't get past the "all over the place" writing. you start it off with I..then go into You, then say it's Daddy?....I don't know, but please pick in what form you are going to write the story in..if you do it in 1st person, then great..if you are going to do it in 3rd person great as well..but when you do it in every type of person..yea that immediately turns me off from the story....sorry not sorry, but didn't like it

So hot

I hope to find more stories. I'll love it when she gets pregnant

Writing style is horrid, stick to 3rd person that way you wont confuse your readers.

The plot idea/concept is great though!

Overall great plot ruined by bad writing

Unlike the others commenting, im able to adapt to writing style easily. Very hot story. I am very much anticipating Daddy's next visit.

Technical issues? screw the critics. It was a good story and I'm looking forward to chapters 2; 3 and so on.

My preference would be he gets her pregnant, Mom finds out and comes to terms with it, and lets him fuck her all the way through the pregnancy.

I hope you write the next instalment soon. Love to her how she loses her virginity