All Comments on 'Daddy Darren'

Well done. I can think of a dozen ways to continue this one as a series, but certainly not necessary. Great first story; please keep writing!

WOW !! YOU MAY HAVE MADE A FEW GRAMMATICAL ERRORS BUT YOU DIDN'T MISS ANY DETAILS ALONG THE WAY . LOVED YOUR STORY .

What a great first story! Makes me wish something like that happened to ME back in the 70s! Please write more (perhaps continue the storyline -- Daddy Darren tries new things with his girl...).

Excellent story! I really loved the way you described the sex act!

Army shorts are blue, and in no way 'skin tight' no matter what the users size LOL. Oh, no buckles either. Damn, I hated wearing those bloody things :)

Apart from that, a very erotic fantasy.

More please.

It would be nice if there are more description about how the father plays on the daughter's nipples.

I like the story anyway.

older armed forces men. yummy, make them do it again please =)

Amazing. Especially final

Scene with her going for his asshole...

Thanks!

He has an experienced teenage whore at home. They must be so proud they raised a future hooker