All Comments on 'Daddy Daughter Love'

I liked the story as it was very well written. The only two criticisms I have would be that it was mostly buildup and very little sex and, given how she fucked herself with a vibrator before, I would have thought her hymen would have been already popped.

If this story made me horny or hungry. "She made..." Breakfast..... Lunch.... Dinner... Yes, we get it. You make and eat food. LOL

you basically ignored genetics at the end.....preg with their fourth? I don't buy it.

Interesting story though.

5........6........789.10

Your pace, was nice until the end. You fit the next several years into a PS note; like oh yeah and all this stuff happened too, the end. Hard to give a fairy tale ending in two short paragraphs.

Excellent story hon, don't change a thing. Never mind the "anonymous" gutless cowards, just delete them. If they had any sense of fair play they would sign in and allow a rebuttal. To be fair I've criticized in the past too, but I've always signed in too allow the writer to send some feedback it's only fair, at least "Sex4lf57" signed in , that is fair and commendable. Writers do learn from some positive criticism, but not leaving a name your not playing fair. I think the story was well done as is. You must not forget this just fantasy, if you want truth go to "Barnes & Noble", or read a newspaper, there's all kinds of violent truth for you every day.

was pretty good up to the part where they fucked and he popped her cherry??????????????? how did she still have one after fucking herself with a dildo?

Wonderful story, very well written. I love that you didn't just jump into the sex; it was an actual story! Bravo. Please write more or continue this one!!

I Dearly loved all of it. You did rush the ending a little to much. slow it down and that would have been a great part 2 to this story. Keep up the great work looking forward to more of this kind of story from You.

i have wanted my married daughter since my wife died.I aways try to feel her tits when we hug, I think she is aware of this.Iwould love to go further but am scared of her reaction so I just think about her as I masturbate

I enjoyed their falling in love and adding sex and multiple pregnancies. (I have a pregnancy fetish).

A weird but sweet little love story.

Guess it had a happy ending with the family of 6 functioning as a normal,loving group.

A badly written story with a well-worn theme. The dialogue was mainly totally unrealistic and, in addition to the many other faults which have already been pointed out, a peek is a quick look and a peak is the top of a mountain.

There’s something about incestuous romance that makes the heart beat faster! Thanks for sharing this story.

Simple yet beautiful. I like how the story focused on their mutual love.