by dannyboy111
Mess up a story by telling us the ending in the second sentence?
It is the exact same story as Meeting my step daughter for the first time The one you say is related is the same. Or am I missing something ?
Okay I get it, two different personalities, two different sisters. The first story, great, it was all about that naive hottie. Second one seemed to be on the path of bitch with attitude needs to learn her place through Daddy's horse cock. Then you decide to end the chapter before you even get to any dialogue between Jenna and Daddy???? What the fuck dude. Is this the same guy who wrote "Daddy needs his blowjob"? Just pure lazy! Unfinished at best I'm giving you one star. Pull this story, rewrite it and make sure it has an ending this time! SMH
a bratty kid xD Can't express enough how I like those type of characters and my elation that you decided to use one here. Great start, can't wait to see what happens next!
You spoiled the entire story in the first paragraph. No need to read any more than that.
Oooh, so great to read about a man who pays proper attention to a girls tits. I'd love it if you fingered and sucked my gorgeous 34ff nipples. Gets me so horny I'd even let you face fuck me mmmmmmm after my titty fuck, of course mmmmmmm
Eww. As an autisic person this was incredibly condescending. Aspergers is an outdated term alone. Then you added one of the most sterotypical traits without any understanding of it.
My daddy had me playing with and pleasuring his big thick horse cock at an early age.
"Aspergers is an outdated term' had me rolling my eyes and laughing. Stop with the 'all words must be deleted or have their meaning changed' bullshit.
I started reading it and I knew right away when he focused on her big tits and then roughed his wife that I don't like this story. You seem to center on big boobs in your stories with stepfathers that can't handle it and go into obsession mode.