All Comments on 'Daddy, I Know You Want To Ch. 01'

good start, but i think some editing and rereading would ,make it better.

This is awesome. So many slutty characters, so many fucking possibilities. Keep writing.

Don't care for all the smoking in the story. Big Turn off.

But, WELL DONE! Thanks for sharing your talent for telling a great incest tale.

I fantasize about fucking my dad's coworkers infront of him

You know what, fuck the bullshit, critisism and the haters, male or female, whoever wrote the story it's fucking awesome. Really, people are complicated and incest or not Sara is sweet and I wish I was Bill.