All Comments on 'Daddy Issues'

Did you intentionally try to take something that could have been very erotic and make it dull, boring, with no emotion or character buildup or anything? I stopped reading about 1/2 way through. I recommend you read some of the stories which you really like - or better yet, ones that the other readers really like and have given a Hot rating. Then compare those stories to the stuff you crank out.

Keep right on writing the way you do. It is intelligent and sexy. I loved it. Gave you a five too.

...YES

[ahem] ... "Stream of Consciousness" narration: not everyone gets it.

The ones that do will give you high scores.

Like me.

5 stars.

Not a bad story but you started half way throuth. There was no lead up to the story how did you start fucking Tanya.s father .I want to hear how you started making love. there shound been more build up

This was both incredibly hot and amazingly well written.

I so get the daddy issue part of this story and I would love if this story had more to it via a sequel. very well written story even without more chapters. I am just greedy for more.

Mini-masterpiece. 5 stars easy.