by trashcan44
it was hot in the first chapter ... but this chapter was crap ... i'm just saying!!!
get the sex faster and less urine and feces in the story
was not to thrilled with the second but waiting on the third to see what
you do with it
Chap.1 was great! Chap.2 not as quite as good. But, please continue this story! Please let us know how Jamie dominates her dad into doing whatever she wants. And eventually her daddy regaining control over her, and doing whatever he wants with her, up to and including pregnacy.
Let her continue her dominating him. Let him be her sub. Let them fill that need for each other. The greatest need that they didn't know each other had.
I want a daughter like her only... More teasing her daddy with her all body fluids and extreme dirty. :p