All Comments on 'Daddy Satisfies'

Get a new proof reader for Gunter99 has missed many obvious mistakes. **

Great story can't wait to read part two

I agree with both comments as of this date.

Get a new editor.

Feeling your nuts.

OR

Feeling you're nuts.

They're not the same

Well, pretty interesting so far! I have to say though, I sure wish I'd been the AC man and dad hadn't been home, she would have had a new boyfriend and I'd have been putting in more 'overtime' away from the house, hehehe. Unfortunately running service calls doesnt seem to turn out nearly as many exciting events as we would all like, hehehe. ....maybe I should start my own company and offer free 'personal checkups' after the pay job is done ;)

Hot story. I gave it four stars and a favorite point. I couldn't give it five stars due to the numerous spelling errors. My favorite was " I could feel his cock touch the Bach of my throat." I guess she tickled his keys too. lol

Very good story, however the typos were killing it. They were numerous and hopefully in the next chapters, you've checked it or had someone check it before submitting it. It interrupts the flow of the story when you have to stop and try to figure out what it should day. Lucky for me, I'm married to the king of bad spellers so most of them weren't too difficult to figure out.

Will Comment on every other Chapter. So far So Good.

3 stars, I think you need to tell your proofreader, 'Gunther99' to get different job, way too many story gaffs and spelling screw-ups to get you past 3 Stars.