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We decided to tell her about our new relationship and dad was going to convince her to join our new naked lifestyle. The next morning i awoke and slipped out of dad's bed and walked down the hall to my room where I hopped into my unused bed so mom would be none the wiser, till we talked to her. I was secretly hoping she would agree quickly so she and I could take our relationship to a new level. That would have to wait for another day though.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months ago3 stars, I think you need to tell your proofreader, 'Gunther99' to get different job, way too many story gaffs and spelling screw-ups to get you past 3 Stars.
Bobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years agoVery good story, however the typos were killing it. They were numerous and hopefully in the next chapters, you've checked it or had someone check it before submitting it. It interrupts the flow of the story when you have to stop and try to figure out what it should day. Lucky for me, I'm married to the king of bad spellers so most of them weren't too difficult to figure out.
Sex4lf57almost 8 years agoHot story. I gave it four stars and a favorite point. I couldn't give it five stars due to the numerous spelling errors. My favorite was " I could feel his cock touch the Bach of my throat." I guess she tickled his keys too. lol
Anonymousover 8 years agoWell, pretty interesting so far! I have to say though, I sure wish I'd been the AC man and dad hadn't been home, she would have had a new boyfriend and I'd have been putting in more 'overtime' away from the house, hehehe. Unfortunately running service calls doesnt seem to turn out nearly as many exciting events as we would all like, hehehe. ....maybe I should start my own company and offer free 'personal checkups' after the pay job is done ;)
