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All Comments on 'Daddy Says No Ch. 01'

by theninjamime

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SexlessStiffSexlessStiffalmost 7 years ago
c'mon

It's an erotic story site.

And sorry, you cannot dismiss rules of writing because you acted as your own proofreader.

That having been said, I think you have a possible good base here, let's see where you go with it.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 4 years ago
very descriptive

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story build up

Wish you would finish this because I really like it :-)

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