All Comments on 'Daddy Takes Beth on Vacation Pt. 01'

I'm surprised Literotica allowed this story of rape to be posted. I stopped reading early on.

First of all it is the noncon section. Don't read nonconsent if you don't like it. Looking forward to the rest.

Loved the story.

Thaaaaank you! Please don't make us wait for long foe pt 2....I don't think I csn handle it.

Don't wait to long but take your time. I love the story!!!!

Loved it!

It made me simply sad to read abtut a group of "Christians" not caring about the c commandments. There musst be a way of telling a very similar story without blasphemy. At least I know was I left church - don't like bigotry.

Wow I just read this on your Tumblr

I loved this. Made me so wet. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I would really like to read the part 2 of this

Please continue this amazing story. I feel it can be expanded to several more awesome chapters of Beth's naive slide into debauchery and perversion and coming to love being a whore and porn star.

I’ve been to lots of church camps, but none were as fun as this!

I need more of this story. The church-related perversion is great.

This is so tucked. Erotic as a fictional story, but thinking of this happening in real life just grossed me out.

Loved this, makes me want to go back to church!

The category is ostensibly non-consent, but it's more of a "grooming victim" story than a straight up "hard rape" story. Also, props on actually doing it realistically.

Oh my .... one can almost feel the moistness and smell the scent of arousal, great job look forward to more .

NICE. This portrays just what I feel about organized religion. Now pen another like themed story focusing on the good God fearing brethren who are followers of the pope . . . .