All Comments on 'Daddy Teaches Slut Daughter a Lesson'

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maliceon_wonderlandmaliceon_wonderlandalmost 9 years ago
ever notice how anonymous is synonymous with little bitch?

I loved it. Srsly one of the better ones that has 'cum' out in a while. No waste of space fluff and bravado just wham bam fucked by the fam. And for someone like me who only has a few min to get off it was perfect! So you're going in to my spank bank and that Anon. Jackole who posted above me can suck it cause I gave you 5 stars & fav, seemed the least I could do after the thrill you just gave me. Plz write more on 'poke-her' night with the rest of the guys or just alone time with Jay that has cold shower inducing potential. Lmk if u write more in another category on this tale. Xoxo Maliceon

maliceon_wonderlandmaliceon_wonderlandalmost 9 years ago
edit

Sorry I meant to say as what who posted BELOW me. Did not think the comments where descending new-old my mistake. -MB

peebudypeebudyalmost 9 years ago
liked it

a good telling of a common theme. the dialogue was tight and the action very hot. well done.

MomspankerMomspankeralmost 9 years ago
Wonderful

Wonderful story and dialog. The idea behind everyone of the stories on this site (to me anyway) is to make the reader horny and to cum. Your story did both.

Either continue with this story or start another one, either way keep writing.

Also anyone that comments as anonymous should be ignored.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it!!!!

Oh it was so good!!! I wanted him to fuck her in the ass more and degrade her more but other then that perfect! It made me so wet!!! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
how long..

Before daddy realizes there's a bit of gaming on Eva's part, and they come to an understanding? she can use whatever is in her tool box to get her motor revved up as much as she likes on her dates, but daddy gets to finish the job - and he can afford to be a bit more accommodating - perhaps even contribute to her wardrobe fund

live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 9 years ago
So hot

That was so naughty and hot. I stayed longer on my lunch break just so I could finish reading this. *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great, Part 2 Suggestions

Really well written, did the concept well, really hope you write a part 2. Was thinking now Eva has been established as her dads property, she could decide shes not having fun at the party with Parker, and head home early. Her slightly drunk dad could answer the door, and well aware of his lack of entertainment for his poker buddies, employ Eva as their 'waitress' for the evening. This could lead to her being made to wear her mothers lingerie as a 'uniform', and generally being an obedient slut for the group of drunk older men :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This is stupid.

How stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More, Please

Please, please write a part two. That was so hot. But you can keep going, now. Show up more. Have him rape her ass. Show him training her further. Make her service all of his poker buddies. Just please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
made my cunt wet

Make her do more..let her suck cocks of all the other men... And get treated like a worthless whore!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Mmm, read it next to my sleeping daddy

My daddy slept naked while I read that. I wanted to pull his hard Dick into me SO bad after reading it, but that would be naughty. Mmm, but then maybe he'd punish me like in the story? Thank you for inspiring me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this! soooo sexy. we need a part 2

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