All Comments on 'Daddy's Baby Whore'

hot, love to hear more!

The dialogue and narrative were somewhat stiff and unreal, and it took the edge off.

Great storyline but the dialogue is very stiff. When writing dialogue trying saying it aloud. If it sounds stiff aloud then it will read stiff. Also, you left the story hanging. I suggest either expanding upon it or altering the ending

daddy can I be your whore.... so hot....please keep going

O: u should totally finish daddy ur writing is amazing cx

-kata

Great I fucking came so hard to that story update soon!💦💦💦

Mmmmm am rubbing my pussy so hard reading this

The dirty talk was cool but the story moved too fast and was kind of lame and it would be better if it was her real dad and he made her pregnant

Please continue the story as a series. Would love to see her get fucked by old dominant men.

I need this!

Extremely hot, nice twist...