All Comments on 'Daddy's Birthday Girl'

The problem most authors on this site have is that they start their story on the 18th Birthday of the primary character. That prevents, based on this site's TOS, for them to build up the story in the beginning.

If this hadn't been her 18th birthday, you could have had an opportunity to build a very erotic beginning. Like the shower scenes and the skimpy clothes she wore around the house which taunted and haunted the father.

Great first story.

Please continue the story. Need to hear a lot more about Cara and maybe some of her friends. More descriptions of Cara's physical attributes.

The title says it ALL!! Please continue this story! 😘 x

I know my father watches me sometimes but I don't know if I should make a move to let him know I think he's hot. I dream about him coming into my room and rubbing his cock all over me, fucking me. I love your story - my panties are wet and I am throbbing.

More like this... short, sweet and lovely!