by Loobyloo2
It was good. But don't mess this story up by keeping them separated. And have her friend confide in her who she us in live with.2
Love it so far. I'm just hoping that the person Madison desires doesn't turn out to be Chrystal. For me, that would ruin the story and be the end of me reading it.
I honestly don't believe that pt.1 and pt.2 were written by the same person. Pt.1 was not only far superior as far as sentence structure, grammar, and such, my first impression when I started pt.2 was wondering if this writer had even read pt.1.
Sorry but I couldn't even finish pt.2 and am skipping the rest of the chapters altogether...