All Comments on 'Daddy's Daughter's Diary Pt. 02'

by Loobyloo2

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prop69prop69about 6 years ago
Keep going

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep writing.

It was good. But don't mess this story up by keeping them separated. And have her friend confide in her who she us in live with.2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
loving it

good story keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
WOW!

Wow! A very sexy story Can't wait for part 3

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 6 years ago
Hoping...

Love it so far. I'm just hoping that the person Madison desires doesn't turn out to be Chrystal. For me, that would ruin the story and be the end of me reading it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I honestly don't believe that pt.1 and pt.2 were written by the same person. Pt.1 was not only far superior as far as sentence structure, grammar, and such, my first impression when I started pt.2 was wondering if this writer had even read pt.1.

Sorry but I couldn't even finish pt.2 and am skipping the rest of the chapters altogether...

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