All Comments on 'Daddy's Girl'

Loved the story and hope there are many more chapters to follow.

I gave you 100 for content because it makes me hot and 00 for editing. That averages 50. Your formatting skills are lacking, your spelling is bizarre, and no woman I know would ever give her descritption as your character did. We just don't think of our bodies in terms of numbers. I know I'm a five foot tall bundle of energy, and I have a b cup, but I'd have to go measure myself to give the description your character did. Lit has an excellent volunteer editor program, please take advantage of it.

That was one of the biggest hard ons I've bee gotten from a story! That "to be continued" shit is too cliche and that isnt very good for erotica, more for an actual book than a short story. I hope to read your next story/stories.

I idea was good but the execution was terrible. Get an editor.