by Tomcatfive
Beautiful! I'm sure some commenters may disagree, but I find the conclusion where Tom lets Jenny go to find a partner her own age to be the most loving act possible, making the overall story that much more tender. Sex with love, it is the best!
I have been waiting for this story for awhile now, well maybe not this story but one that was worth reading as a STORY it's self and not a quick fuck and suck writing with huge cocks and tits.
It was a very warm and lovng story with a wonderful ending.
Thank You
This is the type of stories I like to read. nice and slow building. I hate when other writers does wham bam or huge cocks and big tits. It's nice to see that some writers like you takes the time and build the story nice and slow!! Keep it up and I look forward to read more of you stories maybe even a second chapter to this one?
Beautifully wee done and more than just sex. Intimacy and real love. When to begin and when to end. Nice touch that each found the one.
As close as I've read these last 15 years to being the best classy story with lots of natural passion and love; this will be very difficult to surpass.
love this story, only half way through it- but commenting before I go to sleep!
I love the Daddy-Babygirl kind of themes and this story gave me an interesting insight into a different kind of Daddy-Daughter dynamic in which the girl has more power within the interactions that take place. LOVED the story itself, it's sweet and intimate :)
So very beautiful. I just loved this. By far, the best I've read in a long, long time. So sweet and intimate. Look forward to seeing more like this.
I'm so glad that those who commented all seem to like this story so much. If you are one who does also I'd be very pleased if you would read "The Girl of My Dreams". A very different story, but one you might like as well..
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-of-my-dreams-4
TC 5
It was good, but ending the relationship seemed to be far too forced. It seemed as though you were intentionally tearing them apart simply to create melodramatic ending. It didn't have to be sappy ending, but it also didn't need to be forced either.
Gorgeous story. Wonderfully written, pulled me in and kept me wanting more...not just more erotica, but more of wanting to know, "What's going to happen with these people I care about?"!
Wonderful story great characters. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Very nicely done. It almost read like a harlequin romance. (I mean that in a good way) . . . .