All Comments on 'Daddy's Girls (Urban Fiction)'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Who cares about a part 2?

You've written an introduction and no one wants to waste time on an introduction. Instead of asking for a part 2, you should have finished the story first. No one is going to pander to your ego/self esteem by saying 'write another,' not when there are thousands of finished stories on Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This story blows

Boring as fuck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
re: Part 2?

If you don't know whether or not to continue your own story, if you have so little faith in it, don't bother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Part 2

Go Ahead, it could go somewhere

virgin_slvtvirgin_slvtalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Smd

This was my first time writing a story & I wasn't doing that for my ego. If you don't have anything positive to say, then don't comment on my shit. Have a good day :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

ниггеры тоже пишут. ахуеть

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Love this story continue with part 2 please💕

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

PLEASE do a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
part 2

Keep going, I liked the first part and part 2 would be even hotter, look forward to more stuff from you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
😍

We need more urban incest stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
PLEASE

I am dying to read part 2 asap!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
We need part 2

I loved this story I need part 2 please daddy I'm begging

spoiler22mspoiler22mover 6 years ago
Waiting

Hey bra, you got a good start but come on man. Where's the rest? It was too short and most of the people talking shit are just frustrated cause you didn't really give us any thing but a teaser and you haven't dropped the next one yet. Most writers stop a chapter every one or two days. You git a good story and there isn't enough incest stories on here involving black families so let's go bro. Bring it on, I'm a fan already.

And stop responding to these haters that don't even have enough balls to come off of anonymous

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
PLZ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
part 2

where is part 2 then 3 then 4

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Where's the rest???

Unicornprincess1908Unicornprincess1908about 2 years ago

Please daddy please finish the story I need it

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