All Comments on 'Daddy's Home Ch. 03'

So there's at least another 3 to go; dear God, please kill me now. 1*, and that was after a lot of soul-searching. The author commented in the first chapter that it was a fantasy that their organs were of such unbelievable proportions, so why not just go the whole hog and make them 12 feet tall with feet the size of skateboards and 150" chests? After all, that's just as fucking unbelievable

Ridiculous?, sure Impossible? of course Entertaining? absolutely! I don't expected high class realism here (it wouldn't be lit-erotica with it)but i do expected to be entertained and even captivated with the stories and their "outrageous crap".Does one go to the movies to and expect realism in every film? no and just like our sense of disbelief is suspended for that period of time, so is mine when i read stories where women can have ginormous breast and not have horrible back pain or men with improbable penises and not suffer random injuries for it. I like this author and his ability to make me come back and hope for the next chapter.so is it is crazy? yes Do i care? absolutely not

i read all three chapters, liked it. enjoyed the section of where they have unprotected sex. i think its hot, keep writing

loved it again. I hope this sex with friends does't rip dad and daughter apart, they are so hot together

I am enjoying this greatly. I award you 5 stars and to Hell with the super knit pickers who have nothing else better to do. While i all for constructive criticism there is a line between that and knit picking. Its a fictional story sit back and just enjoy it.

Well done admiral Squish well done. I look forward to the next chapter.

Loved the buildup, their dialogue.

Very sexy...hot!

Fuck, you can write such amazing stories! Little to no grammer problems, sexy as hell stories. I loved the build up it was sooo good. You got a fan for life right here.

-sexyvamp138

Thanks everyone for reading, commenting, faving, and rating! I did not expect to cross the 'hot' threshold with my first stories!

To those displeased by the proportions: Sorry to hear you didn't like it, but it's not going to be changing in this or future stories. I'm sure there are plenty of other stories you could enjoy on this site.

To the rest of you, thanks so much for the positive words! I'm so glade so many of you are enjoying my stories, and I hope I can continue to please if the future! Don't worry, the other girls won't interfere with Rich and Sam's relationship, she'll always be his little girl. I'm glad you guys liked the buildup so much, too, I'll be sure to keep this story in mind as I write future tales, I hope you'll like them just as much!

this story made me so horny. I am so soaking wet right now, and I need a huge fucking cock like that. I am literary about to jump someone. I came 3 times while reading this. MY PUSSY NEEDS COCK OH YEAAAAAAA!!!

I've never cum so hard in my life from just a story. Keep it up

Reaaaaly good. I am a fan of the huge insertion genre, incest not so much but there is not that much quality content in the genre so I take what I get.

Just one note, after such intense anal action you should have made some remarks about the inevitable gape that would occur. Her hole would be more than a little loose and she would definitely be walking funny. I know, it's full fantasy but the realistic tiny details help make the bigger unrealistic details more palatable

I'm a huge fan (pun partially intended) of the huge insertion genre, and I partially agree with the previous commenter - it'd be awesome to see you (in newer stuff, of course) write about showing off the after-gape of the girls' holes after being fucked with something that big. It'd help accentuate how powerful the sex was, and it's hot as hell to read about. They can always tighten up quickly afterwards, after all - it's all fantasy stuff!

Really, really good story.