by NaughtyVisions
Do you plan on this being the final scene, or expanding on it? It's great as a standalone or as just another chapter! I'm looking forward to more of your writing!
You are my favorite author. I love your brain. Wish I could fuck it - Jackie xxx
smiling as i type.....i skimmed so many stories here. never once considered posting a response..but this, that was fuckin' art. finally, a delicious read. ty
This is fecking great, I never leave any comment or even vote...
And you just makes me do both...
While read the other chapters I kind of think about the possible twist ending but just brush it off... How wrong I am...
HELL NO don't end it this way please fucking god don't end it this dam way make a episode 05 I will pay you 107$ (not really) JUST MAKE ANOTHER FUCKING EPI I NEED THIS NOT TO END ecpecially with that code that I can't stand
What a fucking hot story. I need more . This made me so wet I hope you write more!
Make her cum on daddys face
Hmmmm, that was very hot and a real turn on so thank you for that!
I knew it!! She was yanking his chain the whole time!! You really are a "Good girl Janey". Serves him right. Now she can mess with him. bahahaha
What a wonderful twist! Lol Was NOT expecting that...but again, the dad's language turns me on so much!
So you want us to believe she lost both ass and pussy virginity with no preparation and no lube and she made zero noise..just laid there...get the fuck out of here..at least make the pain from the anal break the hypnosis