All Comments on 'Daddy's Hypnosis Help Pt. 04'

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HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelover 8 years ago
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What a twist. I loved it. Deepen their love.

IrishDwolfIrishDwolfover 8 years ago

That was an awesome twist I really loved it

sexymomma57sexymomma57over 8 years ago
Loving this!

Do you plan on this being the final scene, or expanding on it? It's great as a standalone or as just another chapter! I'm looking forward to more of your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow!!

Never saw that coming! Amazing story and I can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice twist !

i hope it doesnt end here though !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Loved the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Twist

You are my favorite author. I love your brain. Wish I could fuck it - Jackie xxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
*shocked face*

WHHHAAAAA!?!? that twist!!!!. AAAAAAWWESOOOME!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
lol fuck yea

smiling as i type.....i skimmed so many stories here. never once considered posting a response..but this, that was fuckin' art. finally, a delicious read. ty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Oh Shit..

This is fecking great, I never leave any comment or even vote...

And you just makes me do both...

While read the other chapters I kind of think about the possible twist ending but just brush it off... How wrong I am...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Oh hell fucking no

HELL NO don't end it this way please fucking god don't end it this dam way make a episode 05 I will pay you 107$ (not really) JUST MAKE ANOTHER FUCKING EPI I NEED THIS NOT TO END ecpecially with that code that I can't stand

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Damn

What a fucking hot story. I need more . This made me so wet I hope you write more!

Make her cum on daddys face

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
* * * * *

Fuck her ass. Now!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Oh wow, thank you!

Hmmmm, that was very hot and a real turn on so thank you for that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Damn.

I've never commented before but that twist. Holy Shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

WHHAAT?

Last one , huh?

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
LOL Right on the money!!

I knew it!! She was yanking his chain the whole time!! You really are a "Good girl Janey". Serves him right. Now she can mess with him. bahahaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
OMG!!!

What a wonderful twist! Lol Was NOT expecting that...but again, the dad's language turns me on so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ummm

So you want us to believe she lost both ass and pussy virginity with no preparation and no lube and she made zero noise..just laid there...get the fuck out of here..at least make the pain from the anal break the hypnosis

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