by NaughtyVisions
Having read the others I know what is truly going on, so I understand what he views as rape is suggestions given to him by his daughter. I would be very bothered and upset if I was reading this without the information. I regularly read stories out of order, and it is common for people to do.
I hope it doesn't alter the rating for your story, but it is likely to do just that. Even realizing stories of this nature are just fantasy it is quit impossible for those who have experienced rape to seperate it. Rape is about violence and control more than it is about sex. This story is about sex and a man who was given a suggestion to violate his daughter by his daughter. Hopefully this comment helps some with the backlash, but I do suggest putting disclaimers on stories with such topics.
You're right, anonymous. I'll definitely mark these in the future, as you can't always see the non-consent tag before reading. I never intended to upset anyone and was foolishly only mindful of those who already read the earlier parts. Thank you for bringing this to my attention. <3
NaughtyVisions
And now it's devolved into rape and forcing himself on her and telling she has to worship him and he'll fuck her until she dies. Such a waste.
Loved this story. Very well written. Didn't have to skip through paragraphs to get to the point. Turned me on to no end. Well done. -Sarah (NZ)
The entire story was very hot. i loved the whole thing especially when it became evident that she was hypnotizing daddy. I came twice while reading it. Would be awesome to continue and maybe she even seduces the priest. Get up the great work!! XOXOHeather Lynn
You're the M. Night Shyamalan of erotic fiction! I've been thinking about the implications of the twist all day. Great writing. It's a hot story all the way through and the last chapter flips the whole series on its head just the way it should.
in the last scene when they're fucking, at some point she would sweetly ask if he remembered her violent fantasies......just before she stabs him. ; o
would've been nice if all of his memories came back, once he finally took her at the end. She could've put a 'clause' on his hypnosis, that he wouldn't remember all she did to him, until he takes her 'against her will', while she's awake, to the point of raping her.
LOL I really enjoy this series despite how messed up it is! Love that Jane's still the one in control, but she still continues to play her daddy. That girl really is a good actress.
I truly enjoyed this series. Your words painted wonderful pictures, some erotic and some confusing, but I'm glad that in the end, Daddy is in control, as it should be.