All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Fuck Toy'

This is by far the horniest story I have ever read . Thank you

Very well written. The childish use of anatomical words and vocabulary that expands as the story progresses served to put the reader in the narrator's shoes, and the pacing is fantastic.

One criticism: the foreword attempts to establish veracity, but it doesn't fit with the growing vocabulary of the narrator. They contradict each other.

It Really mAkes me wanna fuck my daughter and I know it will happen now!!

Pick a name daddy or papa. Stop acting like a legal woman doesn't know body parts. If you want her underage go to a site that allows it. She can't go from not even knowing basic body parts to talking like a two dollar whore in the next paragraph. How do you have him being aminister test fucking her all Saturday and Sunday. What about church? And why since there is not a religious think about this guy. Glad the sex was so tucking it only reason I kept reading.

Could have been great but the dirty talk from someone that doesn't know what a cock is detracts from the naivety of the girl

Damn one of my favorite Daddy/ Daughter stories now.

Redundant. On page 4 I was TOTALLY board. Not much of a story line. No originality.

Should not have had his nuts cut. The story would be much better if he pumped sperm into her womb and made a little baby. Then he could drink her milk while she swallowed his cum.