by Archer2050
Good writing and an interesting scenario, plus a hit imagination, add up to a great story. More to come?
Loved it. Slow to build and I like that it ended leaving us wanting more.
- Petrov.
First, a note on being a grammer, spelling and puncuation Nazi. I try not to be one, but will bypass any story that is just horrible in those regards. Thank you for making a decent attempt to make your story friendly to my reading senses.
Second, this is the first comment I have ever made about any story in any category. I have been reading here for years and I truly cannot believe someone wrote something good enough to make me post a comment. Some stories have touched me, angered me, made me laugh, and some have almost brought tears to my eyes.
I do read for the erotica factor, but I also like to to see the work of a good plot line and an attempt to tell a good story. I have to be honest; most of the publications here are pure garbage. You have managed to rise above that level with this particular story. Cudos.
Not to mention that I thought that your story line was really hot. Yours is the first story I have ever voted for (a five, by the way) and I do not intend to start voting willy nilly now that I cast a vote for one story.
Good job. You deserve to be proud of this story. I look forward to any future installments.
Thank you.
Nicely done. The new angle on this subject is refreshing and imaginative! Would enjoy reading more!
It was pretty good uhhmm I loved that it was his daughter ... Daughter and father couldv done more together though
It was very hot but it amazes me that on this story or tje one I read before, there is no mention of birth control. This story diodn't say it was true so I assume it wasen't.
to the poster about birth control -- this is a fantasy for you to masturbate to, nimwit. why would he write about birth control when the characters are only text on a screen and can't get pregnant!?
I have had a fantasy of watching my daughter giving head n letting him c um in her mouth then kissing me while we share his cum for a long time. Thanks for getting me off
Wow, that was a horse of a different colour…. Naughty but “nice”!
One really wonders what a fantasy that is..
Got my jehones really hot!.love to read more like that! Am I bad?
Very stimulating that’s for sure.
More…more more…Beejay3