All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

Editors are available for free. I know because I'm one. Get one, it would help.

If Kelcie had been away at college and then work for 8 years, she would be say around 26 (18 plus 8). Her Daddy is now only 37? Maybe he just "looks" 37. Minor details can throw off a story - it needs to be believable. Even if he married young (while in college) at age 20, with Kelcie being 26, he would be at least 46 or 47.

The story was cool. I thought it was awesome. 5 out of 5