All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

Nicely paced and very hot. Looking forward to the next part. 5*s

Part 2? There's gotta be more! "Baby" is doing a fantastic job of seducing her dad. Not technically incest, since she is not a blood relation to him, but legally so, if he adopted her, or maybe by marriage to mom. Very sexy anyway!

I'm excited to know if there's a part 2 cause this is of to a good start

I love this! Please continue <3

You should definitely write a part two! Can't wait for the story to continue

Just when the story was heating up, it came to an abrupt end, and my cock was as hard as the Dad's at the mall!

Great story. I love the long slow tease and how the Dad is clueless that his slut of a daughter is seducing him, while making him think he's really in control.

Eagerly anticipating chapter 2.

You left all of us on the edge and then slammed the door. Not nice!!

I also enjoyed the slow build ups and cool offs of the first section. I am looking forward to part 2 of how she continues to tease her daddy.

Please writers always do that, cause daddy came from the bathroom in a robe then he was in pajama pants then back in the robe. It distracts from the story.

Seems interesting, but its pretty damned draggy... And I have a feeling dads gonna be whiny about fucking her. Hell I would have reparked the car, got her worked up and been fingerfucking her in five minutes flat. :)

some people are going to be let down that he's just her stepdad. I like the slow buildup though. Everyone thinks it's hot to just jump right into hot sex; it doesn't work like that in real life. I prefer a little teasing, building up to more, and then finally going all the way.

Get a proofreader.