All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Psychopath Ch. 08'

Yessss, Rhonda needs to be taken down a peg. Now that Eileen and Katy have joined forces it going yo get very interesting. Please update soon.

IQ doesn't really... reach 240.

140 maybe? :)

I suck at this IQ thing, apparently. Good thing I never had mine tested. LOL.

I was hoping that the writer had given up on this series. Too bad I was wrong.

If you guys are wondering the highest IQ ever recorded was 189

I might edit the story later to reflect that.

Number of IQ recorded in history at 200+ . South Korean engineer currently 220+. I myself last recorded modest 193. Highest recorded female was 190. Thought 240+ is rare it I'd plausible.

Goddamn those bitches. They need to learn their fucking place. Why can't Rhonda just kill these people off? Rhonda deserves happiness.

Fucking excellent...I cant wait to see Rhonda's reaction to this "treason"...

can't wait for rhonda to pay for her crimes, dave better snap out of it too

I always knew this story would end but it has been so very captivating, and I never know where you'll take it next. I hope you come out with more stories, I've always loved this series and your writing.

I wish literotica would send an email alerting you to new storys by your fave authers. They shuld have a sugestion box thing as well.

If you've got suggestions to make, you can post them here or use the feedback system. I read every last one and they really do help me write.

I've read the comments on this chapter and the others, and I feel a little strange about how I feel about this story, if that makes any sense. Sure, Rhonda's a crazy bitch who really needs a strong dose of comeuppance, but this story doesn't work without her being exactly who she is.

To all the people hoping David and Rhonda get what they deserve, I say piss off (Very politely and respectfully of course). All of the twisted, evil things she does are done with a positive motivation. She loves her Daddy and wants to do anything to make him happy. She's trying to create a literal utopia for the man she loves. What's so bad about that? Sure she poisons babies and shit, but she hasn't actually killed anyone. She could be bluffing for all the readers know. Perhaps Hussein just came down with the flu on his own and she used the situation to her advantage. As far as the cruel, domineering way she handles everyone but her father, if you view it through the eyes of someone interested in BDSM, then most of the shit she gets up to is actually pretty tame. Telling people what to do? Who cares. Making other women eat her out as part of a D/s relationship? Big deal. It goes on and on. This story is an excellent telling of a common fantasy (Harem and 24/7 access to wild and crazy sex with willing and attractive women), but the thing that makes it truly special, in my eyes at least, is the way Rhonda holds back. She's in charge, whether anyone else likes it or not, and of course some of her methods/decisions are going to be unpopular. Rhonda could turn that mansion into a gruesome slaughterhouse of unholy monstrosities, but she doesn't. Why? Because Rhonda is trying to please the man she loves. Would the readers do things differently in Rhonda's shoes? Probably, but history has shown us time and time again that people will inevitably take their own power/skills for granted and use their advantages for personal gain as often as possible. Rhonda's no different than the rest of us, she's just smarter about getting what she wants.

To LordofHell, I commend you on a strong effort and delightful read. My only complaint with the story is that it takes too long to get new chapters. I missed the release date on this by almost 3 weeks and only found it on accident today. I would very much love to see more regular updates from you.

I never really wrote this story to reflect D/s relationships. None of the three familial characters are actually INTO the D/s lifestyle, although Rhonda certainly enjoys making the others do as she wants. Katy, I suppose, may be into that lifestyle, what with her fetishes for masochism and asphyxiation, but this thought never occurred to David or Eileen.

As for Rhonda, I wanted her power over their minds to be more important than physical dominance, pain, or violence. What makes Rhonda's control fun for me to write is that she can break her targets without resorting to physical torture and murder. Someone who can force others to do what they want just with words and leverage--slowly destroying their choices and free will--is really sexy to me, and I hope most of my readers feel somewhat the same.

I'm trying to get more writing done, but as I've said in the past, real life gets in the way often. Because of that, I'll be responding to comments more often so that my readers know I haven't abandoned them (and that I'm still alive).

Thanks for commenting!

I wasn't trying to imply that their relationships were following a D/s theme. I was merely trying to point out to the haters that everything Rhonda gets up to is actually quite tame when viewed through an alternate perspective. Personally, I quite agree with you that psychological control can be far hotter than physical control. Rhonda is one of the most interesting fictional characters I've ever come across, and I was just trying to persuade some of the other readers to show her a little appreciation. (As opposed to wishing she would die a lonely, painful, miserable death.)

I have nothing but affection for your storytelling abilities, and hope you'll keep up the good work for years to come.

I know I'm probably alone, but I have no desire to see Rhonda "win." Katy's the way out for everyone involved.

Can't wait to see how Rhonda restores control in Chapter 9. This story is a departure from the stories I usually read, but Rhonda's ruthlessness is compelling.

Things to seem to be going off the rails, but I'm hoping that the story ends with a 'happy ending' for David, and his ever growing family. Surely Rhonda will bring things to a satisfying equilibrium, all be it one that leaves her firmly in control.

Thanks for all the hard work over the years LordOfHell. May the storytelling continue for many more!

"Everything here is mine. My father. The bitch. Your pretty little ass. And all of your ugly children. I own you all."

Just from that line of the story, i have to officially say i can not support Rhonda. She is not just a Psycho but she is beyond corrupt. Yes i want David and Rhonda to be together and happy most of all but they are together for all the wrong reasons, she brainwashed David but still abuses him in a way. I understand she loves him and wants only her and David to be together, but its just the fact about the brainwashing i can't handle. I can't stand having a corrupt character like Rhonda winning. If David was not brainwashed and was still himself then and only then could i support what Rhonda is doing.

I just want all the characters in this story to end up happy in the end. Great story, i can't wait to read the next chapter, oh and please don't take a year to write another chapter, that is a looooong wait for an amazing story!

But Gratz for the amazing story so far, this series out of all the story's i have read on literotica the 4th story ive been glued to reading every chapter in less than 24 hours! And of course the other 3 all had full plot and story to them!

When is the next chapter coming out? 11/5/2014???

Com'on man

P.s please don't end this with a Kumai-fuckin-ya happy Disney ending, this can't end well for any one of them and you know it

I randomly checked up on this story today and flipped out after seeing that you updated it for the first time in a year!! The sudden Katy + Eileen pairing seemed far too sudden for it to be natural but you did mention ahead of time that anything goes in the conclusion! This chapter was still hot as fuck (used my vibe reading it and came twice!) and I can't wait to see how you finish things up. Glad to see you haven't died LordOfHell and thank you for an amazing series!

I don't think that anyone should win, I think that they all should be happy.

Rhonda especially, she's doing all this to make her father happy. I didnt like the addition of all the other sluts but I got used to this.

All I really want is for David to become unbrainwashed and decide for himself whether or not he wants to continue living the way he is.

That's be the perfect ending! :)

Please continue this story line. It is actually damn good.

This"story" has nothing to do with eroticism. It's a stupid redneck piece of inane drivel about your fascination with "breeding" a bunch of unlikable women.

Great writing, though: "...seeing her writing under me...," "bear hands." Go back to Tennessee. Thanks.

Caroline

I discovered this series yesterday, and I have spent hours both yesterday and today reading through all the chapters. Amazing! I really enjoy reading incest stories. Usually they make me so hot, if they are written well. However, this story was just so different. I did not touch myself while reading this series at all. And, don't take that as an insult. It is actually a compliment. I was hooked on the actual twisted tale you have written. This is not just a story that I would use to get myself off. This is a story that I could not stop reading because I was so interested in knowing just what was going to happen to all these characters next.

As far as how you decide to end it, I am not rooting for Rhonda to "win" or to be taken down. You have written her as such a complex character that I do not see her as evil or good. She is just so brilliantly twisted. I love it. Oh, and also I loved the beginning of this chapter when we got insight into how Rhonda felt growing up, and got an insider's view on how she became the way she is today.

Keep up the good work, and I will continue to check for the next chapter in this terrific tale.

Finally the series continues! Even though the end is near now, all the threads are being picked up.

Just amazing!

Title xD

God I love this story. I can't wait for 5/11/14 to roll around so I can read Ch. 09! Cheers!

I came on here to find something to dj my clit to,and instead of getting wet on my vagina,im getting wet on MY FACE.FROM TEARS.because im CRYING! Plz make eveyone escape this hell of a life!! I want rhonda in jail and everyone free! Plz,do it for a girl like me plz :( PLEASE i beg YOU

I don't believe your age, but i do agree it is a sad story so far. And if you are telling the truth, LOL your a bit young for this stuff, let alone reading incest stories.

Thanks for the laugh.

I am more mature than other slutty 14 year olds!

I just have daddy issues,and i like this stuff!

I even created a profile just to tell u that!!

So leave me alone plz

Dude...this is a very exciting series and has a lot of twists and turns..please can you tell me when this series will come to an end and please post chapter 9 of the story

I've always loved this series.

they are like opposites it will be fun to see their fight and who gets the last laugh (hoping for barry to win)!

come on you can't leave us hanging

Writers like you should be shot

You're a fucking shit heel. I concur with the guy below, writers like you should be shot. FUCK YOU!

I hope you choke on cat shit you fucking scumbag.

Hello, LordOfHell! I started reading this series about a week ago. I'm honestly glad E & K got away, for now at least. I get that R is a super villain, but she isn't invincible, esp not with unpredictable glimmers of humanity (like in D, K, and E this chapter---such a lovely touch!). I've been reading this for masturbation purposes and because it's a page turner. I love the humiliation stuff, cuckquean and forced submission esp. But honestly, I'm invested in the characters too now. Great story; keep writing! Going to check out your other stories now :)

I absolutely love this story. It is by far one of the best I've read on this site... And that's a lot haha, but it has such a good plot to it. Most of the stories have no plot on this site. I'm really looking forward to chapter nine. Please hurry :) thanks for writing!

According to Fucking WHO has this story been abandoned? WHO?!

Hello, LordOfFire! I absolutely love your works, especially this series. I've just started reading it a couple of days ago, and I'm hooked! It's kind of sick but hot at the same time.. ;) Anyway, you haven't uploaded for 8 months or so.. Is anything wrong? I expected an update after a couple of months. I apologise if I'm wrong. Nonetheless, I love this series, and I hope for more! And I'm eager for Eileen and Katy to win and go on. Screw David and Rhonda! :P

I use to like this story even though Rhonda scared me to death. As the story passed chapter 5/6, it changed from a psychological terrorization of family to a harem of buyable pussies???? What? It should now be renamed Katy & Eileen or Daddy's Pussies. Daddy's Little Psychopath is barely a footnote.

Great story, i personally don't condone or console incest what's so ever, but may Rhonda please find happiness with her daddy, i mean she loves her, isn't that what matters the most?

I am an avid reader and this is a non stop thrill ride! The words flow and take you with them. Expertly done. I can't wait for the next chapter. An interesting twist wld be to have "Katy"'s brother show witth a more active role. Whether he's good or bad. :)

I'm liking the direction the story is heading, but I don't want the story 2 be anticlimatic. I really could see this story becoming a full movie n it would be brilliant far better than 50shades of gray the movie. the way the story was written is truly amazing. I'm not an avid reader but u have kept me interested and begging for more

It's been like 2 years or something stupid that we've been waiting. Sadly, I think this profile is dead. At the very least I don't think we'll ever get a resolution.

I know, sucks we won't ever get to find out the outcome.

Comr on man...... were dying!!!

I'm a sub, & just... the way you make everything turn on those under her control, I.e. Everyone, makes Rhonda just so perfect. The manipulation is so satisfying, please don't stop until this story has a proper end! I'm begging, & waiting, hopeful.

Amazing story. Just different enough from the usual format of love to keep me interested throughout. Needless to say, but I cannot wait for the next chapter. You obviously have a great talent for these types of stories and I hope this won't be your only chapter:ed story.

Holy shit what an amazing read that was. Just wish you finished it.

No seriously

Getting really tired of this, finally find a good series and the author vanishes.

After all of that work she deserves him. And him to be only hers.

Well its 2019 still no part 9 i guess the story laves us in limbo

I spent all this time invested in a series that just stopped?

It's been 7 years and it's obvious that there's no ending coming for this one, which is a shame as it was an awesome story. I guess this is how it ended:

Rhonda reached over and brushed away the tears that were rolling down her father's cheek. "I'm sorry, Daddy," she said looking at him with sympathy.

David stared at the monitor, watching as Katy and Eileen took their children and drove away. "I can't believe they just left like that... I really thought they loved me."

Licking her finger, Rhonda savoured the salty tang of his tears, vowing that they were the last he'd ever shed over another woman. They tasted like victory.

"They never loved you like I do, Daddy," she said gently, kissing him with gentle tenderness. "Forget about them... you'll always have me."

He nodded, the devotion in his eyes sending a thrill through Rhonda. "You're right, baby." David stroked her swollen belly, proud of his fertile girl. "You always knew what I needed."

"My potent Daddy... so virile... such a stud," Rhonda breathed, her voice husky and seductive.

His primal growl made Rhonda's pussy gush and then she was roughly bent over her desk, her Daddy pounding her like he was possessed. He spanked her hard, giving her the brutal dominance she craved, his girth stretching her and making her climax like crazy over his thick Daddy cock.

David leaned over, his lips pressed against her ear. "You won Ronnie... You're the only woman in my heart. But there's a price..."

She froze on the peak of ecstasy, shocked that he'd make any demands. Rhonda turned to look at him over her shoulder, full lips curling into a wicked smile. She knew what her Daddy needed.

"I've got a new selection of nubile young sluts all ready for you, Daddy," she purred, her pussy twitching around his cock. "Do you want to pick which ones you want to knock up next? A fresh girl every week for the rest of your life... all those teenage wombs just waiting to be seeded with your hot load."

He answered her with a loving kiss, sealing their debauched bargain. Rhonda would see to it that he impregnateded hundreds of young women, thousands even, but she was better than all of them... the only one he truly loved. That thought had her screaming his name as she climaxed, her shrieks of ecstasy intensifying as her Daddy filled her with his incestuous cum.

Dang. This was so good it had me on the edge of my seat. I was really looking forward to more.

"But I could only imagine how terrible Rhonda's fury would be . . ."

So never finished the Story ? Wow , thats rude Rhonda

Ok, my ending is this: first, the father will end things when Rhonda says that she doesn’t need him anymore, but he would do it because of the safety of the kids. I don’t care if a story is dirty or kinky, but kids need to be secure, and I thought it was a little bit out of character for Dad to forget their kids. But Dad can’t forget Rhonda, of course BUT he doesn’t knows that Mom also misses Rhonda and the whole situation, she enjoys being a cuckquean. Dad asks for a divorce, but Mother says no, and proposes that they talk to Rhonda. Mom and Dad give in to Rhonda, so everybody is sexually happy fulfilling their fantasies, and no kid is harmed anymore. That is my ending, because when I’m reading a sex story, I value an ending where all characters are sexually and mentally satisfied, and kids are safe.

I only have 2 things about this story that i didn't like simply because it can't happen in real life then again this is fantasy. 1. Idc how smart your kid is they aren't doing trig an psych as a 4 or 6 yr old no rn way. That was in the first chapter. 2. The fact it has no ending. It was a great story an agree it could an should be a movie with the exception parts of the first chapter be re written to actually make sense. All in all great story wish there was more to it. 8 out of 10 simply for no ending otherwise most likely a 10 out of 10

Mannnn, even Rhonda blackmailed the Author for not making Pt 9. This an evil world we live in smh 😔😔

Man please finish the story