All Comments on 'Daddy's Present'

... and I read and understood your rubric -- but the 'Daddy/baby-girl' thing really freaks me out. So thank you and four stars, and remember, whatever you do, you can't please everyone!

I stumbled on ATM and on his use of the word worthless. ATM is icky. Words cannot be unsaid and do more damage than any implement ever could. Poor choice on his part. Otherwise, it is a strong piece. The bond between them is evident.

licking up your own shit off the floor and off his cock is not sexy.

To go from his little to his slave I think was too much at once just because she was given his collar. She did not clean up shit from the floor but her cum from squirting and in her thoughts knew the floor was clean. I am very concerned with him calling her worthless for not cleaning his cock after him taking her anally and also wanting her to remain tense during anal. She had not had time to offer to clean him for one and having to stay tense, is a form of punishment in my mind as she was starting to relax and the act not as painful. I know that Daddy's or Dom's make their subs come until they are spent, but he did lay with her after, which was not indicative of his prior actions.

Great job! Sexy story, well-written, captivating. Very enjoyable. I hope you write some more! :)

xx

By far the best thing I’ve read on here ever