by Rheyn
Great story, reminds me of reading some of nightshadow or ladyess works. Which by the way are my favourite
Keep up the great work, dont rush it, if it neexs fime give it timd.
Thank you for the comment and comparison to some of your favorites, I hope to keep getting better at what I do and eventually become an author well known for my more adult themed books that keep people coming back.
I just read all three chapters. It's very good so far. It has a good pace and everything feels very real. I love it.
You could reintroduce the "sales girl" and have the daughter be introduced to lesbianism or three ways. Just a thought. Keep up the great work.
Thank you everyone for the positive comments and the encouragement for more stories. i plan to continue this series for a bit more, I do have a small plot on it I am building up on, and have an ending in sight. But I am glad everyone is enjoying the story the way I hoped.