All Comments on 'Dad's Sad Dilemma Ch. 04'

You lost me with this chpt. Ken should have been sent to bed, not standing around, too much , too much. Do they all sleep in one bed together?

Surely his wife would not have been able to bridge the chasm in her mind without Ken's active encouragement. He can leave Jon and Susie to private intimacies once his hopes are realised.

sorry..but this story is a total drag..lacks any eroticism..ridiculous dialogue..and is so far from "Surprise".. in sex chareged dialogue..which was definetly hotttt and erotic..these entire 4 chapters are just a total bore...it is unbelievable that the writer of "Surprise"...and this post.... are the same! ! ! hope you return to writing more in the "Surprise" vien in the future..

That was a nice Chapter you wrote about Jon having Susie fall in love with him and admit to Ken that she was no longer his woman. Will you continue this story? It would be nice to see Jon and Susie move away from the old house and move someplace new as husband-and-wife and continue the relationship and have children.

I agree. this is becoming boring. It needs to pick up a little.

READ, READ, READ, READ, READ, READ, READ. GOTTA FINISH THIS SERIES!

awesome brilliant very exciting hot story.

i was wishing it would go on and on. but there a lot more to cum yes thats the word . this story just gets better with each part . reading this is like being right there., seeing all this taking place more of this out story .

dad,s sad dilemma ch4 is such a turn on .

Just like last chapter I cried. This is a romance. No it is not the lust that everyone wants, but it is just as good with this kind of dedication and love.

A wonderful ride of emotions as the sick father sacrifices a bit of is happiness for his wife... in a off the wall fashion. Very well written and told story throughout the saga.