All Comments on 'Dahlia - Birth of an A.I. Ch. 05'

The number made me a little sad. I know it was just a number, but to think of being only 1 in 380 is somewhat depressing. Still, I understand that the number is still massively huge and the percentages are just darts (Or is it? ^.^) but I suppose it just makes a certain since that the majority of people would prefer people being in charge. I just don't have that kind of faith in humanity.

Lovely story again. Thank you very much.

there are many error of judgements . when someone tried to kill you once then you should be more careful. it is mistake to give techs to unworthy ones. they should enhanced their security for threats. more strong spy nanites ( audio and visual ). also they should keep the spy nanites running in back as corrupt surely will conspire constantly and try to grab the new home to make corrupt like earth. also would be good to keep an option open to destroy all invention which can make to travel in space and making space weapons. also giving the advance comms tech is mistake. point is when someone is not worthy for any good then it is your responsibility to give them any powerful and advance tech. it is always wise to stay ahead of them and keep a provision to cut the root if anyone try to misuse it to harm you. i loved book one and two and was looking for three. but book three making me uneasy. i hope taking so many humans in new home with hope for a better world will not do any harm to this sweet family when there are no spy nanites to monitor. looking for future chapters if those can make me happy again

Totally awesome tale! Five stars ain't enough! My only beef is, Bankers and Lawyers on the new planet, talk about fucking up a new system. There's got to be a better way than trusting those crooks. Thank you for this wonderful tale.

Loving the story. Please keep entertaining us

Beyond the beginning of the story, Paul's parents are never mentioned. He never lets them know they're going to be grandparents? No mention if they wanted to come along? For someone who wants a large family, he has no family roots to base it on. Unless he's actuallt an A.I. himself...

I think that's the point, the whole grass is always greener on the other side.

He had no brothers and sisters growing up, and he's been neglected by parents too busy to spend time with him. He doesn't know what a big family is like, but he does know what the other feels like, so he doesn't want that for his kids. He wants his child to have brothers and sisters, and wants to be there for them. That's a pretty basic concept in psychology, not sure where that confusion is coming from.

Maybe I should have spelled it out better, but I didn't want to drag down the story with angst, he put it behind him and is happy with the ladies, anything else would just be whining.

Second point for untrusting.

Obviously, giving the technology to the government sucks, but there's no way to avoid that if he and the ladies want to give it to the rest of the world, you know, the quality of human life they want to see improved. Kind of a rock and hard place there.

Obviously, he DID keep back some of the technology, such as the improved FTL to keep an edge, nor did they ever share their mass sensors or stealth technology, and there's more to come in chapter six that will be kept just between them.

Lastly, thanks for all the amazing feedback!

I’ve really enjoyed this story and hope to read many more by this author. Thank you for presenting us with such a thought provoker.

Did he leave his parents on Earth? They were never mentioned past the starting chapter...