by daddysgoodlittlegirl
This story got me hard as hell. It was well written and I cannot wait to reas more.
this is exactly what i look for on this site. your idea of hot is fucking hot my friend.
The story needs to be at least twice as long. You caught my attention but it was over just as it got to the interesting point. Great first try.
Dom Woolf
It was so hot. my pussy got wet so fast, i was soaked by the end. More please
HOT...can't wait to see what daddy makes her do next
Can't wait to read the sequel. Good beginning, man!
This is my favourite story in a long time. I've been waiting for you to continue it or write something else. Please hurry... lol.
....are there really that many repressed little girls out there fantasizing about daddy?Pistolpackinpete
I really enjoyed your story. I was disappointed that they didn't get far, but I am anxious for part 2.
pleeeease write more this got me so wet its my ultimate fantasy and u write it brilliantly i cant take my hands out my knickers...
Keep writing. You mix innocent and slutty well, and I appreciated the small moral battle Daddy went through before deciding to go there. I could tell that you were enjoying the story while taking your time to create the right mood. Continue. I'd definitely like to see more in this series.
One page from 'innocent girl' to captured sex slave. Well done. The excitement builds relentlessly with the heartrate of the reader. "Pound it to her!" is what he is thinking as you close this chapter.
love the story so very hot and horny.
can't wait to read more of daisey's story daddy taking me.
more more more ,omg i'm a girl and i'm soo wet , i wish my dad was like that
Love the both innocent and sexiness of it all. Oh where's my daddy? This story got me hot and bothered!
Please write more soon!!! I'm a lesbian, but I would love for my Daddy to be fucking me because he is SO hot!!! I love this story!!!
Can't wait for him to fill her teenage cunt full of his fat daddy cock. Damn, wish I had a good girl like her.
I don't know if you are still active here, but I had to tell you that your story aroused some really taboo feelings in me. If you are still here, write more.