by basicbitch
Man oh man, most pointless story I have ever read . Was this suppose to be a turn on . Just a load of crap.
why add he could not go to his poker game she is 18? she could also ĝet her own food...there is not a chance in the world anyo with DD or bigger or even smaller C cups would ever be able to do cheerleading with no bra ..especailly if school is strict like you state..take out that stuff and it will be better
Totally lacking in credibility, juvenile, obviously written by someone far too young to be on this site.
Great story, it's so freaking hot! I hope you continue with the next chapter.
Puerile crap from an underage "writer".
Ignore the hater comments. Whether parts of the story were ''realistic'' or not, this story was great! Maybe the previous commenter should look up the word '' fantasy''. Can't wait to read the rest, although I need to recover a little first.
Basicbitch has to be one sick fuck.
I never thought a story would get me sick.
If that what basicbitch was trying to do, you did it.
There is no limit to fantasy humiliation but this POS so called writer has gone way beyond that.
Just Sayin'
Yes the story is unrealistic. If you're into realism then I wouldn't recommend this. However if you're into humiliation then hell yes. This story is great for those with humiliation kinks.
Overall I enjoyed it and would love to read more of this story.
Funny. Those people commented on the story while this one had to comment on them for daring to have a different opinion, yet, somehow, THEY are the haters.
...with huge tits. No interest on sucking on cows' tits.
To anyone who gets hot with humiliation, stark power contrasts, sinister intentions masked by authority deferential, and juicy, juicy "Good girl"s, read on. This 43+ part series kept me cumming back nearly every night, and I'm now rereading two weeks later. Incredibly well-written ESPECIALLY for this kind of story, with thoughtful story logic continuity, plus a dash of fantasy... Simply, great.
I'm looking forward to spending time with Daisy and Tom, and whoever else shows up.