All Comments on 'Dallas'

I really liked the flashback scenes and thought Dallas was well developed as a character. The wife, Hannah, could have used some more development, I think. Personally, I like understanding what it is the woman gets out of the relationship, to me, that's the sexy part!

I was enjoying the story all the way until Brendan fucked Dallas which, in my personal opinion, ruined the scenario. I liked the idea of a dom who was submissive in her presence and my mind immediately began imagining the possibilies. The scene where she cuckolded Dallas by having Brendan fuck her and the ruined orgasm were well done but from then until Brendan left could, in my opinion, have been omitted without harming the story. A ruined orgasm for both of them and then made to lick up each other’s cum and then both taking turns at rimming her. It’s a pity because without that it would have approached the excellence of your Finn stories.

Where the hell is part 2? I'm dying here, don't leave it like that.

Please...

Where are the other parts Syptember?

When I originally wrote this story I did so because I was having a little writer's block for Finn and needed to free up my thoughts, and this story was the result. At the time I had no intention of posting it, then went against my better judgement and did so anyway. I never intended for there to be another chapter until recently, and maybe once I'm done with Ray I will revisit this story. Thank you both for the encouragement to do so, and I hope you don't feel as though I've left you hanging.

Gets Night out ?

He didn get anything but blue balls and ass pounding.

LOL

Please, please, please.

This was so hot.

I wish I was him

Where is the rest?

Agree with themaninhighcastle Dallas have pretty miserable life. Getting screwed by wife bulls and only ruined orgasm for him. He is really lucky that wife loves him (LOL), because it's really hard to think how his life would be in other case.

A big, strong man, a star in his field, being forced to submit to another man and of course his wife. It's splendid, reminds me of some of Nessus's work from the old Altairboy site...just made me crazy!

Don't see the love in this one. Ass fucked, ruined orgasm and kneed in the balls don't really show it.

Unlike ray and finn which I really enjoyed. This snippet is more like abuse from the dom to the sub. She may say she loves him, but her actions don't show that. Since the implication is much of what takes place is not a turn on for him,

As usual however, very well written.

This is my first time reading a story from this author and very impressed I am . The quality of the writing, the back story, the characters and descriptions are first class and unlike some of the feedback to the tale I enjoyed the enforced buggery of Dallas and the ruined cum shot. It all added to him Mistresses powers. Enjoyed from start to finish and will be reading more of this authors work. Thank you and obviously five stars

Compared to your other stories where the domme shows care and compassion. For me this appeals to a different audience.

of why any sensible guy would not place his wellbeing in the hands of another person. With power comes responsibility, the wife here just abuses her husband for her own entertainment.

How do you love a toy , that's a possession?

I would think that's not a relationship love but love for a pet.