by sr71plt
Loved the twists and turns you've managed to fit into this short story as well as the emotion and the sex too! Loved reading it.
I'm constantly awed by your singular talent to wrap me up and nestle me snugly inside a world that crushes me, warm, moist and utterly aroused, only to reach the end and find myself back in this very cold, hard unforgiving place called reality. You never fail to wipe me out. Never.
I always feel like I've been transported to a world different from my own when I read your stories...no matter where the story is based I can see what you desribe. The information you provide always snag my interest.
I liked this story mostly for the integrity of the main character. But I have to admit I didn't really get why his lover exposing the govenor in that way helped mend their relationship - or at least not immediately. It's often that way when I read your stories, cause they are often understated (in a clever way) and full of subtle nuances in social interactions, and I'm not really good at that.
Hi Tim, Kirk was allowing Jeremy to expose the governor who had used him without Jeremy' being blamed. Kirk was also showing Jeremy that he had chosen him over the governor and wanted to be with him for himself and not as part of 'damage limitation'. Good story.
Two kinds of damage control at work here, eh? Of course, only one really worked, and how! Very clever little tale!
But . . I just wish they were longer. With more details, the stories would flow better.