All Comments on 'Damaged but Renewed'

by Boondocker42

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arrowglassarrowglassabout 7 years ago
Well done!

Nice one...HOT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Fix the spelling errors.

There are FAR too many, and detract from actually a pretty good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Totally revisit April. Lovely woman with depth.

BruceWoBruceWoover 4 years ago
Great story but...

It is waiting for chapter 2 to be written

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