All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle Ch. 09'

Finding the story interesting and fun to read... Waiting to follow however many twists the plot takes and enjoying the ride.

#10 is already submitted; working on more to come.

Truly a great read

I liked your story very much - it's almost too close to reality to be mere fiction.

Do me a favor please: produce a hard copy of this story once it's completed and send

it CARE OBAMA (not OBAMACARE;: using that channel it would never reach him..).

Oh,another favor please: add a few more chapters to the story and bring it to a good finish.

I see that you said 10 was done and submitted. I'm checking 2-3 times daily awaiting to see when it gets approved. Please continue this great story and don't feel rushed to release at a certain pace or to wrap it up anytime soon. I've seen too many stories just end 2 chapters after it gets really good. By the way are you going to revisit the pond and other buildings that Dan originally built?

As I said, I submitted #10 a few weeks ago, but for some reason my story's parts get rejected multiple times for minor misspellings that other writers seem to get a free pass on. It seems like this site always drags their feet on my stuff.

As for revisiting the underground lake building.... well, I don't like to give spoilers... you'll have to wait and see. Just keep in mind, there are quite a few new people in the Cave.