All Comments on 'Dan Loses Control for a Toe Ring'

He removed her foot and handed it to her?

This sounds like a 16-year olds effort at using adjectives. Way too many Way too many.

He'd met with Joan over the winter. Seems like he's already a regular customer the puzzle is to whom he was ever sending flowers, while he's falling in love with Joan. I've never heard of anyone besides the wholesaler sending flowers to a Florist.

"He looks looked at her...." May we assume that's not a double-take?

The gentleman is wearing a tie. Of course he's wearing a DRESS shirt. There's no need to overstate the obvious.

I can understand her dress falling to the floor. That's gravity. Even with powerful floor fans I've never heard of a dress falling up.

And her foot. WHAT?

"Dan felt his penis get hard at anything Joan said." This is probably the only thing you got right.

I enjoyed the story. Ever since I can remember, I’ve always been aroused by older women’s feet. Especially if they have painted toenails.

Just.. never write again.