All Comments on 'Dana & Casey's First Love'

Why would anyone take the time to write a story as good as this is, yet fail to spend a few more minutes to read it and be sure that you have written what you intend to? The failure to do so takes away from the final product.

Spellcheck is not a substitute for proofreading.

I could not read past the first page. Please read this story, correct some of the major errors, and resubmit. Thanks.

I liked the story. A bit too long for my taste and the end was a little anticlimactic. You need to check spelling, common words that don't get caught by Spell Check, i.e. their-there, scarred-scared, where-were. Just a careful read and you can catch these. Write more.

Sorry, worst dialogue ever

I am 58 and never in all that time did I ever use the term sensuous in trying to breach a pair of panties. Just saying ...

I hate condoms... Otherwise a sweet story. Part two, please!

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