All Comments on 'Dance of Seduction Ch. 04'

It was great, and I am always happy with a happily ever after. Good writing!

That was great. I'm glad mike and Jennifer got their happy ever after.

good story. Need more of continuing story.

I liked the story. Too bad you have stopped writing it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

A fun read and very well done. I really enjoyed this one. Thanks

Love does conquer ll, and Mike and Jennifer prove this. I still imagine Mike with a nice coating of sexy hair for that gorgeous muscular chest. And long may they love each other! You COULD write another chapter that takes them into young parenthood. These are two very sexy and loving people who belong together, as Capt. Greene says, because they "complete" each other.

too many grammar errors. please fix.

“Now that you’re a beautiful rich widow...” Why are those things important? He can only declare his love if she’s beautiful and rich?

To anonymous

I guess a little teasing quip is something you are unfamiliar with. I really thought all the previous prostrations of love made it obvious how Mike felt about Jennifer. After all they could only marry after her husband was dead.