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Osrick123Osrick123over 13 years agoAuthor
First submission

Comments welcome

latecaller67latecaller67over 13 years ago

Your fundamentals are good. It's refreshing to read something full of complete sentences! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Enjoyed it.

Very believable and sexy, could easily imagine it happening.

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