All Comments on 'Dancing for Money'

well done

A good little extract that is complete in itself.

I really like the way this is written. the feeling of it is more intense because of the abstract way its presented. lol it is really good just with this, but I would definitely love to see more :D

The story was everything it needed to be: hot, erotic, and teasing. I do hope you write more in the future, I would love to read it.

I need to know what happens next!

My girlfriend and I came up with a plan: we would smoke some reefer, and then one of us would read a Lit story aloud, while the other would perform oral sex on the one that was reading. I selected your story for my girlfriend to read as I ate her cunt. It was an excellent choice.