All Comments on 'Dancing for the Deejay'

by MrPezman

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I-WISHI-WISHalmost 17 years ago
Wonderful

"Exquisitely terrific", enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A wonderful love story!

This very simple story is a very good example of how really erotic love can be. It doesnt take a cheater, a drunk, or a dopehead. Just plain simple this man loves this woman for whatever reason. I am married to my dancer for me but I was not a deejay. The story title got me interested and I am very glad I read it. She and I have been together for some 14 years now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
:)

Lovely story. I like how realistic it is. Strangely I can relate to quite a bit of it (half asian, strict family, recent first timer)

Wouldn't mind seeing a followup ;)

12bolt12boltalmost 2 years ago

I love the way you build all your characters it was a excellent love story

MoMiner64MeteMoMiner64Mete2 months ago

I have read this previously and thought it was very good. It is well written and very sensuous. However, it seems that the author quit way too soon and I question that such a young and inexperienced young woman could deep throat her partner. After he had given her mind blowing head it’s understandable that she would want to perform deep throat for him. Even though it’s been many years it really begs that the author extend the story to satisfy his readers. MM

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