All Comments on 'Dancing in Manhattan Ch. 01'

I realize now how horribly typo-ed this is. I wrote it at 2:30 in the morning, and am realizing now maybe I should write when i am awake.

First day of release and is already 2000 + reads. Don't forget to comment, i cant make it better, unless you say something

im intrested to see were this goes and how you will develop the characters

p.s luv that they r both southern ;) but would like to know more about how blake looks and if they have any distinct attribute..a devilish grin maybe :P

good luck x